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   제 목   Should other low-lying island nations plan to build floating cities?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-06-24
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  A.) Should other low-lying island nations plan to build floating cities? Building floating cities could not be the eternal protection for inundation due to the rise of sea level. So Maldives' case could not be the model which other countries must copy. B.) Make these sentences into English. (06/18/21) -송금했다는 것을 확인해주실 수 있나요? Could you confirm our remittance? -귀사가 8월13일에 3만달러를 보냈다고 되어 있네요. It is recorded that you remitted 30,000 dollars on August 13. -정확하게 지불하셨습니다. You made an accurate payment.
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A.) Should other low-lying island nations plan to build floating cities?

 

Building floating cities could not be the eternal protection for inundation due to the rise of sea level.

So Maldives' case could not be the model which other countries must copy. 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(06/18/21)

 

-송금했다는 것을 확인해주실 수 있나요?

Could you confirm our remittance? 

OR 

=> Could you check that the payment was made?

-귀사가 8월13일에 3만달러를 보냈다고 되어 있네요.

It is recorded that you remitted 30,000 dollars on August 13. 

 

 

OR 

=>  It says here that your company sent $30,000 on August 13.


-정확하게 지불하셨습니다.

You made an accurate payment. 

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.