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   제 목   Will China’s new three-child policy solve its aging population problem?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-06-24
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  {HOMEWORK} A.) Will China’s new three-child policy solve its aging population problem? The three-child policy would be helpful to solve the aging population problem. But it could not be enough without securing better environment for parenting. B.) Make these sentences into English. (06/21/21) -이메일로 영수증을 보내겠습니다. I will send the receipt by email. -영수증을 팩스로 보내 드릴까요? Can I send the receipt by fax? -선전 전에 일부분을 내고 한달 후에 나머지를 결제할 수 있나요? Could the payment be completed a month after part of the money is paid before advertisement?
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{HOMEWORK}

A.) Will China’s new three-child policy solve its aging population problem?

 

The three-child policy would be helpful to solve the aging population problem.

But it could not be enough without securing better environment for parenting. 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(06/21/21)

 

-이메일로 영수증을 보내겠습니다.

I will send the receipt by email.

=> We will send you a receipt by e-mail.


-영수증을 팩스로 보내 드릴까요?

Can I send the receipt by fax? 

OR 

=> Would you like the receipt sent by fax?

  

-선전 전에 일부분을 내고 한달 후에 나머지를 결제할 수 있나요?

Could the payment be completed a month after part of the money is paid before advertisement?

 

=> Is it possible to pay a portion before shipment and the remaining a month later?

 

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.