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   제 목   Would you like to read the notes, drafts or manuscripts written by famous authors?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-06-26
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  A.) Would you like to read the notes, drafts or manuscripts written by famous authors? I have curiosity for famous authors' papers. But I am not passionate enough to read them. B.) Make these sentences into English. (06/23/21) -신용장은 저희 거래를 용이하게 만들 것입니다. The letter of credit will make our business easy. -신용장을 개설하는 절차가 생각보다 길어질 수도 있습니다. The procedure of opening the letter of credit could be longer than you thought. -전체 대금의 70퍼센트에 해당하는 금액으로 신용장을 열겠습니다. We will open the letter of credit for 70% of the total amount.
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A.) Would you like to read the notes, drafts or manuscripts written by famous authors?

 

I have curiosity for famous authors' papers. 

But I am not passionate enough to read them. 

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(06/23/21)

 

-신용장은 저희 거래를 용이하게 만들 것입니다.

The letter of credit  will make our business easy. 

 

-신용장을 개설하는 절차가 생각보다 길어질 수도 있습니다.

The procedure of opening the letter of credit could be longer than you thought. 

​ OR 

=>The letter of credit might take longer than we thought to actually process.

 

-전체 대금의 70퍼센트에 해당하는 금액으로 신용장을 열겠습니다.

We will open the letter of credit for 70% of the total amount. ​​

 

 

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.