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   교정강사   Catherine(C)    등록일   2021-07-06
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  A. How can countries control fishing? I think they made some laws about fishing. B. Make these sentences into English. (07/05/21) -우리는 그들에게 점수를 보여줄 거야. -Vanessa는 나에게 비밀을 얘기할 거야. -그 아이들은 도로를 건너고 있다. -We will show them our results. -Vanessa is going to told me a secret. -The children is going cross the road.
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A. How can countries control fishing?

I think they made some laws about fishing. ---> I think they should make some laws about fishing.​ 

 

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

B. Make these sentences into English.

(07/05/21)

-우리는 그들에게 점수를 보여줄 거야.

We will show them our results.​ Corrected pattern=> We will show them the scores.

-Vanessa는 나에게 비밀을 얘기할 거야.

Vanessa is going to told me a secret.​ Corrected pattern=>​ Vanessa will tell me a secret.

-그 아이들은 도로를 건너고 있다.

The children is going cross the road.​ ​Corrected pattern=>​ The children are crossing the street.