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   제 목   Homework(07/13/21)    상 태  
   교정강사   Dette(C)    등록일   2021-07-15
   작성내용
  A. What is your favorite toy and why? -> My favorite toy is princess toys. Because playing with princess toys is fun. B. Make these sentences into English. -내 생각에는 토마토랑 고추랑 국수 사야해. 이 외에 더 있나? -> I think I have to buy tomatoes, red peppers, noodles. Anything else? -내가 생각해 볼게. ->I will think. -양파도 좀 있어야 하고. 당근이랑 버섯도 있어야해. ->I need some onion, carrot and mushroom.
   교정내용
 

A. What is your favorite toy and why?

-> My favorite toy is princess toys. Because playing with princess toys is fun. --> My favorite toys are the princess toys because playing with them is fun.​ => Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

-내 생각에는  토마토랑 고추랑 국수 사야해. 이 외에 더 있나?

-> I think I have to buy tomatoes, red peppers, noodles. Anything else? --> I think I have to buy tomatoes, red peppers, and noodles. Anything else?​ => Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 

-내가 생각해 볼게.

->I will think. --> Let me think about it. ​ => Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

-양파도 좀 있어야 하고. 당근이랑 버섯도 있어야해.

->I need some onion, carrot and mushroom. --> We also need onions, carrots and mushrooms.​ => Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.