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   교정강사   Catherine(C)    등록일   2021-07-16
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  BOOK: CORE ENGLISH BASIC (1) A. Make a shirt story of your weekend in detail. In the afternoon I'll eat lunch and take the books back to the library. And, I'll play game about travel. And the last, I'll write about story in a book. B. Make these sentences into English. (07/16/21) -물론, 내가 제일좋아하는 거란다.: Of course, That is my favorite thing. -내가 스파게티를 손수 만들었어요.드셔 보세요. 어때요?: I handmake this spaghetti. Please try some. How dose it tastes? -너무 맛있다.: It so good. (THAK YOU SO MUCH)
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A. Make a short story of your weekend in detail.

 

In the afternoon I'll eat lunch and take the books back to the library. ---> In the afternoon, I eat lunch and take the books back to the library.​

 

And, I'll play game about travel. ---> And, I play travel​ games.​

 

And the last, I'll write about story in a book. ---> Lastly, I write stories in a book.​

 

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

B. Make these sentences into English.

(07/16/21)

-물론, 내가 제일좋아하는 거란다.

Of course, That is my favorite thing. Corrected pattern=> Of course, that's my favorite.

-내가 스파게티를 손수 만들었어요.드셔 보세요. 어때요? I

I handmake this spaghetti. Please try some. How dose it tastes? Corrected pattern=>​ I made spaghetti by myself. Try some. How is it?

-너무 맛있다.

It so good Corrected pattern=>​ It's so delicious.

 

You're welcome, Sammy! ♥ ​