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   교정강사   Mariel(C)    등록일   2021-07-16
   작성내용
  A. How do you feel when there is a power outage at your house? (to be scary) B. Make these sentences into English. -나는 컴퓨터가 필요해.(I need a computer) -나는 컴퓨터 새로 샀어.(I bought a new computer) -웬일이니, 돌돌아?게임 같이 할래?(What,Doldol.Why don't we play games together)
   교정내용
 

How do you feel when there is a power outage at your house? 

(to be scary)​ -- I feel scared.  => Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

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I need a computer. ✔​

I bought a new computer. ✔​

What,Doldol.Why don't we play games together -->What's going on Doldol? Shall we play the computer game? => Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

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