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   교정강사   Mariel(C)    등록일   2021-07-16
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  A. What do you usually play using your smart phone? (I usually watch youtube) B. Make these sentences into English. -오, 그래?(Oh,really?) -엄청 많은 가전 제품들이 있더라.나 컴퓨터 새로 샀어. (There are many home appliances.I bought a new computer) -축하해!(Congratulations)
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What do you usually play using your smart phone? 

I usually watch youtube. -- I usually watch YouTube videos. => Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

 

​Oh,really?  

There are many home appliances.I bought a new computer. -->There were a lot of electronics. I bought a new computer.  => Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

Congratulations  --> Congratulations! (Punctuation)