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   교정강사   Mariel(C)    등록일   2021-07-16
   작성내용
  A. How do you like to celebrate your birthday? (I usually eat cake) B. Make these sentences into English. -어제 뭐 했니?(What did you do yesterday?) -놀이 공원에 갔었어. 사진 엄청 많이 찍었어.내가 보여줄게. (I went to amusementpark.I took pictures a lot.I'll show you) -멋있다! 너는 뭐 했니?(Great!What did you do?)
   교정내용
 

How do you like to celebrate your birthday?

I usually eat cake. ✔​

 

 

​What did you do yesterday? ✔​

I went to amusementpark.I took pictures a lot.I'll show you -->I went to an amusement park. I took a lot of pictures. I'll show you them. 

Great!What did you do? --> How nice! What did you do? 

 

 

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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