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   제 목   Would you like to be a member of the Templeton Prize panel?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-07-17
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  A.) Would you like to be a member of the Templeton Prize panel? It would be my honor to be a member of the Templeton Prize panel. I have no reason to reject the proposal. B.) Make these sentences into English. (07/02/21) -저희 가게는 리베이트 자격요건을 넘어 섰습니다. Our store is over the qualification for rebate. -당신의 성취를 축하 드립니다. I would like to applaud your achievement. -현재 환급률이 얼마인가요? What is the current refund rate?
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A.) Would you like to be a member of the Templeton Prize panel?

 

 It would be my honor to be a member of the Templeton Prize panel.

I have no reason to reject  the proposal. 

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B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/02/21)

 

-저희 가게는 리베이트 자격요건을 넘어 섰습니다.

Our store is over the qualification for  rebate.

 

OR 

=> Our store has surpassed the requirement for rebate.

 

-당신의 성취를 축하 드립니다.

I  would like to applaud your achievement.

 

=> We congratulate you of your achievement.

 

-현재 환급률이 얼마인가요?

What is the current refund rate? 

OR 

=> What is the current rebate rate? 


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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