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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-07-21
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  HOMEWORK: A. Tell me about your favorite place? My favorite place is my home.Because it`s cozy. B. Make these sentences into English. (07/21/21) -돌돌이는 어디에 있니? = Where is Doldol? -돌돌 이는 휴가중이야.내 생각에 돌돌이는 조개처럼 행복할거야. = Doldol is on the vacation.I think Doldol is happy like a clam. -안녕,얄미야. = Hello,Yalmi.
   교정내용
 

HOMEWORK:

A. Tell me about your favorite place?

My favorite place is my home. Because it`s cozy.
=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(07/21/21)

-돌돌이는 어디에 있니? = Where is Doldol?

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 

-돌돌 이는 휴가중이야. 생각에 돌돌이는 조개처럼 행복할거야. = Doldol is on the

vacation.I think Doldol is happy like a clam.

-> He's on vacation. I think he's happy as a clam.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

 

-안녕,얄미야. = Hello,Yalmi.

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.