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   교정강사   Niah(C)    등록일   2021-07-22
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  A. Make three sentences using the word "soon". He will come back soon. The storm is coming soon. How soon do you on a vacation? B. Make these sentences into English. (07/22/21) -안녕, 심순아. 돌돌이는 어디에 있니?난 최근 돌돌이를 보지 못했어. -그는 휴가 갔어. 가족이 모두 제주도로여행을 갔어. 내 생각에 아마 돌돌이는조개처럼 행복할거야. -우와! 나도 여행 가고 싶다. -Hi, Sim soon. Where is Doldol? I haven't see Doldol these day. -He is on a vacation. All his family are on a trip to Jeju Island. I think maybe Doldol will be as happy as shell. -Wow! I want to go on a trip, too.
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A. Make three sentences using the word "soon".

He will come back soon. (Correct)

The storm is coming soon. (Correct)

 

How soon do you on a vacation? --> How soon will you go on a vacation?

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(07/22/21)

 

-안녕, 심순아. 돌돌이는 어디에 있니?난 최근 돌돌이를 보지 못했어.

-그는 휴가 갔어. 가족이 모두 제주도로여행을 갔어. 내 생각에 아마 돌돌이는조개처럼 행복할거야.

-우와! 나도 여행 가고 싶다.

-Hi, Sim soon. Where is Doldol? I haven't seen Doldol these days.

-He is on a vacation. All his family are on a trip to Jeju Island. I think maybe Doldol will be as happy as a shell.

=> Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

-Wow! I want to go on a trip, too.  (Correct)​​