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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-07-23
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  HOMEWORK: A. What’s your favorite game to play? I like to play mobile games. B. Make these sentences into English. (07/23/21) -나도 그래. 우리 가족은 보통 방학때 가긴 해.나는 수영도 좋아하지만 때로는 좀 색다른걸 해 보고 싶어. = Me too.My family is going there on the vacation.I like swimming but i want to do something special. -예를 들면? = Like a what? -스노쿨링! 나는 수영 뿐 아니라 스노쿨링도 다 해보고 싶어.나는 산호에 매우 관심이 많아. = Snorkeling! I want to play snorkeling.I`m very interesting with coral.
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HOMEWORK:

A. What’s your favorite game to play?

I like to play mobile games. ✔ => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

B. Make these sentences into English.

(07/23/21)

-나도 그래. 우리 가족은 보통 방학때 가긴 해.나는 수영도 좋아하지만 때로는 좀 색다른걸 해 보고 싶어.

 = Me too. My family is going there on the vacation. I like swimming but i want to do something special. -> Me, too. My family usually goes to the beach for vacation. I like to swim but I want to try something different.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

 

-예를 들면? = Like a what? -> Like what?

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

 

-스노쿨링! 나는 수영 뿐 아니라 스노쿨링도 다 해보고 싶어.나는 산호에 매우 관심이 많아.

 = Snorkeling! I want to play snorkeling. I'm very interesting with coral. -> Snorkeling! I want to go not only swimming but also snorkeling. I'm interested in cards.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.