아이디   비밀번호  

영작교정(첨삭)

  • home  Home>
  • 마이페이지>
  • 나의 수업관리>
  • 영작교정(첨삭)
   제 목   Why is Germany’s invasion of Russia often described as “war of annihilation”?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-07-26
   작성내용
  A.) Why is Germany’s invasion of Russia often described as “war of annihilation”? It is said that about 27 million people died during the Germany’s invasion of Russia. That may be the reason why it is described as war of annihilation. B.) Make these sentences into English. (07/21/21) -누가 내륙운송, 해상운송비와 항구 수송비를 부담하게되나요? Who will pay for the cost of inland, marine and port transportation? -물품을 지체 없이 바로 항공편으로 보내주실 수 있나요? Could you send products by air without delay? -지연 없는 직항노선을 찾아주세 Please find a direct line to avoid delay.
   교정내용
 

A.) Why is Germany’s invasion of Russia often described as “war of annihilation”?

 

It  is said that about 27 million people died during the Germany’s invasion of Russia.

That may be the reason why it is described as war of annihilation. 

 

=> It is said that about 27 million people died during the Germany’s invasion of Russia. That may be the reason why it is described as a war of annihilation.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/21/21)

 

-누가 내륙운송, 해상운송비와 항구

수송비를 부담하게되나요?

 

Who will pay for the cost of inland, marine and port transportation?

OR 

=> Who covers inland transportation, ocean freight and port fees?

 

-물품을 지체 없이 바로 항공편으로

보내주실 수 있나요?

Could you send products by air without delay?

OR 

=> Is it possible to send the items by air without delay?


-지연 없는 직항노선을 찾아주세

Please find a direct line to avoid delay.

OR 

=> Please seek a direct vessel that can come with no delay.


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.