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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-07-26
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  HOMEWORK: A. What was the best holiday you ever had? On my best holiday,I went to the Seoul. B. Make these sentences into English. (07/26/21) -멋있다! 정말 굉장한 소리처럼 들린다. 나는 수영은 좋아. 하지만 깊은 물은 두려워. Wow! I think it`s wonderful. I like swimming but I don`t like deep water. -그럼 나는 계곡에 있는게 더 낫겠다. = Then I`m stay in the valley.I think it`s better. -그는 언제 = He`s what
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HOMEWORK:

A. What was the best holiday you ever had?

 

On my best holiday, I went to the Seoul.       => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(07/26/21)

-멋있다! 정말 굉장한 소리처럼 들린다. 나는 수영은 좋아. 하지만 깊은 물은 두려워.

Wow! I think it`s wonderful. I like swimming but I don`t like deep water. -> Cool! I hear they're beautiful. I like swimming but I'm afraid of deep water.

-그럼 나는 계곡에 있는게 낫겠다. = Then I`m stay in the valley.I think it`s better. -> Well…You should stay in the valley.

-그는 언제 = He`s what->When does he come back?

=> Another way: Your sentences are okay and these are other ways of saying them.