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   교정강사   Dette(C)    등록일   2021-07-28
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  (07/28/21) -여보세요, 심순이 있나요? Hello, Is there simsoon? -전데요, 누구세요? It's me, Who are you? -나 돌돌이야.잘 지냈니? I'm Doldol, how have you been?
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(07/28/21)

-여보세요, 심순이 있나요?

Hello, Is there simsoon? --> Hello? Is simsoon there?

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

-전데요, 누구세요?

It's me, Who are you? --> This is her. Who's calling?

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

-나 돌돌이야.잘 지냈니?

I'm Doldol, how have you been? --> This is Doldol. How are doing?

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.​​