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   제 목   homework Christine (07/28/21)    상 태  
   교정강사   Catherine(C)    등록일   2021-07-29
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  A. How does Iran differ from your country? Iranian must follow religious laws but Korea isn't. B. Make these sentences into English. (07/28/21) -그는 자기 돈 모두를 도박에 썼다. -그들은 군인들을 환영했다. -그녀는 구조대원들에게 감사를 표시했다. -He spend all of his money on gambling. - They welcomed military. -She express her appreciation to rescue workers.
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A. How does Iran differ from your country?

Iranian must follow religious laws but Korea isn't. ---> Iranian must follow religious laws but Koreans ​mustn't.​

 

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

B. Make these sentences into English.

(07/28/21)

-그는 자기 돈 모두를 도박에 썼다.

He spend all of his money on gambling.​ Corrected pattern=> He spent all his money on gambling.

-그들은 군인들을 환영했다.

They welcomed military.​ Corrected pattern=>​ They welcomed the soldiers.

-그녀는 구조대원들에게 감사를 표시했다.

She express her appreciation to rescue workers. Corrected pattern=>​ She thanked the rescuers.​