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   교정강사   Niah(C)    등록일   2021-07-29
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  A. Write a weekend diary. Minimum of 3 sentences. I will visit my grandma. and I'll read a new book. I will try to draw my favorite Harry Potter's dormitory logo. B. Make these sentences into English. (07/29/21) -잘 지내. 여행은 어떠니? -정말 멋져! 난 잠수함도 타고 돌고래 쇼도 보고 회도 실컷 먹었어.나는 정말 조개처럼 행복해. -너 진짜 좋겠다. -I'm good. How is your trip? -It's great! I rode a submarine, watched a dolphin show, and ate a lots of raw fish. I really happy like a shall. -You must be really good.
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A. Write a weekend diary. Minimum of 3 sentences.

I will visit my grandma. and I'll read a new book. --> I will visit my grandma and I'll read a new book.

=> Corrected structure.

I will try to draw my favorite Harry Potter's dormitory logo. (Correct)

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(07/29/21)

 

-잘 지내. 여행은 어떠니?

-정말 멋져! 난 잠수함도 타고 돌고래 쇼도 보고 회도 실컷 먹었어.나는 정말 조개처럼 행복해.

-너 진짜 좋겠다.

-I'm good. How is your trip? (Correct)

 

-It's great! I rode a submarine, watched a dolphin show, and ate a lots of raw fish. I really happy like a shall. --> It's cool! I took a submarine,saw a dolphin show and had fresh fish. I'm as happy as a clam. 

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

-You must be really good. (Correct)​​