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   교정강사   Catherine(C)    등록일   2021-08-03
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  A. If you could meet with Leonardo da Vinci, what questions would you ask him and why? I would ask "What mind did you have while you were painting the Mona Lisa." B. Make these sentences into English. (08/02/21) -언젠가 내가 가르쳐 줄게. -도리는 어떠니? 그녀도 잘 있어? -아니, 도리는 나만큼좋지 않아. -I will teach you sometime. -How is Dori? How is she? -No, Dori is not so good as me.
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A. If you could meet with Leonardo da Vinci, what questions would you ask him and why?

I would ask "What mind did you have while you were painting the Mona Lisa." ---> ​I would ask him, "What was in your mind while you were painting the Mona Lisa?".​

 

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically. 

(Punctuation)

B. Make these sentences into English.

(08/02/21)

-언젠가 내가 가르쳐 줄게.

I will teach you sometime.​ Corrected pattern=> Someday, I'll teach you.

-도리는 어떠니? 그녀도 잘 있어?

How is Dori? How is she?​ Corrected pattern=>​ How's Dori? Is she well?

-아니, 도리는 나만큼좋지 않아.

No, Dori is not so good as me.​ ​Corrected pattern=>​ No, she's not as good as me.