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   교정강사   Belle(D)    등록일   2021-08-03
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  Yesterday, I ate a soybean noodles. It's very delicious. It's good food.
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Yesterday, I ate soybean noodles.

It was very delicious, it is a good food. It makes me full.

 

 

 

Hello Damhee,

I also tried eating soybean noodles, it is very delicious and has interesting color for me..

Good job in writing your diary :)

 

-BELLE