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   제 목   Are countries prepared for record-breaking heatwaves?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-08-11
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  A.) Are countries prepared for record-breaking heatwaves? Please elaborate your answer. The heatwaves are a phenomenon of airflow congestion. The recent heatwaves in Canada is unusual and might be caused by global warming. So no preparation could not be thought except decreasing emission of carbon dioxide. B.) Make these sentences into English. (08/10/21) -기내에서 개봉하지 마십시오. Don't open it in the cabin of airplane. -400달러어치의 면세품을 살 수 있습니다. You can purchase as much as 400 dollars of duty free products. -초과 금액에 대해선 세금을 내야 합니다. You are supposed to pay tax for the excessive amount.
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A.) Are countries prepared for record-breaking heatwaves? Please elaborate your answer.

 

The heatwaves are a phenomenon of airflow congestion.

The recent heatwaves in Canada is unusual  and might be caused by global warming.

So no preparation could not be thought except decreasing emission of carbon dioxide.

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

The recent heatwaves in Canada are unusual  and might be caused by global warming.​


 

 B.) Make these sentences into English. 

 

 (08/10/21) 

 

-기내에서 개봉하지 마십시오. 

Don't open it in the cabin of airplane.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

Please do not open it on the plane.

 

-400달러어치의 면세품을 살 수 

 있습니다. 

You can purchase as much as 400 dollars of duty free products.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

You are allowed to take back 400 dollars worth of items duty-free. 


-초과 금액에 대해선 세금을 내야 

 합니다. 

You are supposed to pay tax for the excessive amount. 

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.