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   교정강사   Jeniffer(C)    등록일   2021-08-13
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  HOMEWORK: A. Do you like vegetables? Um.. some vegetables I like it like broccoli ,onion or lettuce etc. B. Make these sentences into English. -그녀는 나에게 노래를 불러 달라고 요구했다. She want me to sing a song. -새가 날개를 퍼덕이고 있다. The bird is bating. -그 그룹은 7명의 엔지니어로 구성되어 있다. The group is made by 7engineer.
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HOMEWORK:

 A. Do you like vegetables?

Um.. some vegetables I like it like broccoli ,onion or lettuce etc.  ---> Um.. I like some vegetables such as broccoli ,onion or lettuce and etc.

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 B. Make these sentences into English.

-그녀는 나에게 노래를 불러 달라고 요구했다. 

She want wants me to sing a song. --->She required me to sing.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

 

-새가 날개를 퍼덕이고 있다. 

The bird is ​bating. ---> The bird is flapping its wings.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

 

-그 그룹은 7명의 엔지니어로 구성되어 있다.

The group is made by 7 engineer ​engineers.​ ---> The group consists of seven engineers.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.