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   제 목   Who do you think is the greatest artist of all time?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-08-19
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  A.) Who do you think is the greatest artist of all time? And why? I think that the art is human activity or its result to express a feeling. In this point no artists could be superior to a child. B.) Make these sentences into English. (08/18/21) -다 방법이 있죠. I have got my ways. -네 남자칚구는 마음이 넓어 보여. Your boyfriend seems to have a broad mind. -그녀는 나 핚테 마음이 없는거 같아서 포기했어. I gave up because she was not interested in me.
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A.) Who do you think is the greatest artist of all time? And why?

 

 I think that the art is human activity or its result to express a feeling.

 In this point no artists could be superior to a child. 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(08/18/21)

 

-다 방법이 있죠.

 I have got my ways.

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

- There's a way.

-네 남자칚구는 마음이 넓어 보여.

Your boyfriend  seems to have a broad mind.

=> Your boyfriend seems to have a broad-minded. 

-그녀는 나 핚테 마음이 없는거 같아서 포기했어.

I gave up because she was not interested in me.

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

-She seems to have no heart for me, so I gave up.

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.