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   제 목   Was Mr. Biden right to make the pipeline agreement with Germany?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-08-22
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  A.) Was Mr. Biden right to make the pipeline agreement with Germany? Russia is a threat to the western world led by America. Germany's dependency on Russia for its energy could weaken the alliance among the member countries. Mr. Biden would need to intervene the pipeline project of Russia and Germany. So making the pact with Germany is not a matter of whether right or not but that of unavoidable. B.) Make these sentences into English. (08/20/21) -그녀는 항상 편안하고 성격도 무난해요. She is always comfortable and kind. -제가 통 시갂이 안 나네요. I have difficulty in making time. -너핚테 정말 잘 어울린다. It fits you very well.
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A.) Was Mr. Biden right to make the pipeline agreement with Germany?

 

Russia is  a threat to  the western world led by America.

Germany's dependency on Russia for its energy could weaken the alliance among the member countries.

Mr. Biden would need to intervene the pipeline project  of Russia and Germany. 

So making the pact with Germany is not a matter of whether right or not but that of unavoidable. 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(08/20/21)

 

-그녀는 항상 편안하고 성격도 무난해요.

 She is always comfortable and kind. 

 

-제가 통 시갂이 안 나네요.

I have difficulty in making time.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

- I'm running out of time.

 

-너핚테 정말 잘 어울린다.

It fits you very well.


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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