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   제 목   Should a president have the right to shut down a country’s parliament?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-08-24
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  A.) Should a president have the right to shut down a country’s parliament? Power or authority are likely to be misused or abused, which makes a monitoring system necessary to admanistration. Parliament has a role of monitoring the administeration. There could be an occasion for a president to do some actions for immense situations without consent of parliament. But it could never be thought to shut down parliament in a democratic country. B.) Make these sentences into English. (08/23/21) - 전 예쁜 여자 앞에 있으면 얼굴이 빨개져요. My face turns red in front of a beautiful woman. - 하루 종일 라면이 땡기네. I have missed Ramyeon all day long. - 일손이 부족하네. We need more workforce.
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A.) Should a president have the right to shut down a country’s parliament? 

 

Power or authority  are likely to be misused  or abused, which makes a monitoring system necessary to admanistration.

=> Power or authority  is likely to be misused  or abused, which makes a monitoring system necessary for administration.​


 

Parliament has a role of monitoring the administeration. 

=> Parliament has a role of monitoring the administration. ​

 

 

There could be an occasion for a president to do some actions for immense situations without  consent of parliament.

But it could never be thought to shut down parliament in a democratic country.

=> There could be an occasion for a president to do some actions for immense situations without  the consent of parliament.

But it could never be thought to shut down parliament in a democratic country.​

 

 B.) Make these sentences into English. 

 

 (08/23/21) 

 

- 전 예쁜 여자 앞에 있으면 얼굴이 빨개져요. 

My face turns red in front of a beautiful woman.

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

- My face turns red when I'm in front of a pretty girl.

 

- 하루 종일 라면이 땡기네. 

I have missed Ramyeon all day long.

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

- I've been craving ramen all day.


- 일손이 부족하네. 

We need more workforce. 

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

- There are not enough workers.

 

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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