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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-08-26
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  A.) Why is Venice described as "living museum"? Its is said that Venice was founded about 1,600 years ago, which means that most of its buildings are very old. Besides, they are intricately decorated. These facts would lead Venice to be called as 'living museum'. (08/25/21) - 생사람 잡는 거에요. It would get an innocent person into trouble. - 그냥 얼렁뚱땅 넘어갈 생각하지마. Don't play silly games with me. - 여자친구와는 잘 되어가? How are you going with your girlfriend?
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A.) Why is Venice described as "living museum"?

 

     Its  is said that Venice was founded about 1,600 years ago,

 which means that most of its buildings are very old.

 Besides, they are intricately decorated.

 These facts would lead Venice to be called as 'living museum'.

 

=>     It is said that Venice was founded about 1,600 years ago,

 which means that most of its buildings are very old.

 Besides, they are intricately decorated.

 These facts would lead Venice to be called as 'living museum'.​ 


(08/25/21)

 

- 생사람 잡는 거에요.

 It would get an innocent person into trouble.

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

- It's about catching a living person.

 

- 그냥 얼렁뚱땅 넘어갈 생각하지마.

Don't play silly games with me.

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

- Don't think you're just going crazy. 


- 여자친구와는 잘 되어가?

How are you going with your girlfriend? 



• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.