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   교정강사   Kristina(C)    등록일   2021-08-26
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  HOMEWORK: A: If you had a pet cockatoo, what would you call it and why? I think it will be different by their behaviors or colors. B: Make these sentences into English. (08/27/21) -난 뉴욕으로 가는 비행기를 예약할 거야. I will book a plane to New York. -이 연고는 간지러움을 덜어준다. This medicine relieves the tickling. -그들은 새로운 도서관을 세웠다. They build the new library.
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A: If you had a pet cockatoo, what would you call it and why?

 I think it will be different by their behaviors or colors. 

*I think it would be different based on their behaviors and colors. 

~> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.


B: Make these sentences into English.

-난 뉴욕으로 가는 비행기를 예약할 거야. I will book a plane to New York.

*I will book a flight to New York.  

~> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it.

-이 연고는 간지러움을 덜어준다.  This medicine relieves the tickling.

*This ointment relieves itching.

~> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/expression.

-그들은 새로운 도서관을 세웠다.  They build the new library.

​*They erected / built a new library. 

~> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.