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   교정강사   Enya(C)    등록일   2021-09-03
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  HOMEWORK: A. Is physical activity (jogging, going to a gym, swimming pool) an important part of a healthy life style? To maintain healthy life all people need physical activities. especially to weak and old person are needed it necessarily B. Make these sentences into English. (09/03/21) -외국인은 할인이 됩니다. The foreigners can discount. -지금 여권을 소지하고 계십니까? Do you have a passport now? -자국의 언어로 된 오디오 가이드를 빌릴 수 있습니다. You can borrow a native language audio guide.
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HOMEWORK:

A. Is physical activity (jogging, going to a gym, swimming pool) an important part of a healthy life style?

To maintain healthy life all people need physical activities. especially to weak and old person are needed it necessarily

CORRECTION: To maintain a healthy lifestyle people need to have physical activities, especially elderly needed it the most.

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B. Make these sentences into English.

(09/03/21)

-외국인은 할인이 됩니다.

The foreigners can discount.

CORRECTION: There is a discount for foreigners.

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-지금 여권을 소지하고 계십니까?

Do you have a passport now?

CORRECTION: Do you have your passport on you?

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-자국의 언어로 된 오디오 가이드를 빌릴 수 있습니다.

You can borrow a native language audio guide.

​CORRECTION:​You can rent an audio guide in your language.