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   교정강사   Catherine(C)    등록일   2021-09-03
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  BOOK: CORE ENGLISH BASIC(2) A. Use 'go out and go away in sentences. His daughter goes out with her friends. The dog didn't goes away from his owner. B. Make these sentences into English. (09/03/21) -죄송해요. 저도 이 길이 처음 이예요.: Sorry. this road is first time. -실례지만, 제가 도와드릴까요?: Excuse me, May I help you? -오, Fun 서점을 알고 있나요?: Oh, Do you know 'Fun book store'? (THANK YOU SO MUCH)
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A. Use 'go out and go away in sentences.

His daughter goes out with her friends. ✔

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The dog didn't goes away from his owner.  ---> The dog didn't go away from his owner.  ​

 

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

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B. Make these sentences into English.

(09/03/21)

-죄송해요. 저도 이 길이 처음 이예요.

Sorry, I'm new here.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

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-실례지만, 제가 도와드릴까요?

Excuse me, can I help you?

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

 

-오, Fun 서점을 알고 있나요?

Oh, do you know the Fun Book Store?

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

 

You're welcome, Sammy! ♥