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   교정강사   Vanessa(D)    등록일   2021-09-03
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  Today is windy and sunny day. It's cold in morning and night. It's cool weekend is come. I like the weekend. It's good. My friends are very good and kind. It's awesome. Have a good weekend.
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Today is windy and sunny. It's cold in morning and night. The cool weekend is coming and I like it when it's weekend. It's really good.

My friends are very good and kind. It's awesome!

Have a good weekend!

 

Have a great weekend, Serim! Good night! ^^