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   제 목   Should the U.N. pay countries that provide soldiers for its missions ?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-09-04
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  A.) Should the U.N. pay countries that provide soldiers for its missions for peacekeeping or combating militants? Please elaborate Providing soldiers would cost much money. If it would be carried out for the UN, its cost must be attributed to the UN. So it would be natural that those countries are indemnified. B.) Make these sentences into English. (09/03/21) -바람을 쐬면 긴장이 좀 풀리거듞요. Air change makes me relaxed. -내가 깜빡 졸았나 보구나. I might have fallen into a doze. -도와주고 싶지맊 저도 꼼짝을 못하겠네요. I would like to help you, but I am stuck now.
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A.) Should the U.N. pay countries that provide soldiers for its missions for peacekeeping or combating militants? Please elaborate

 

Providing soldiers would cost much money.  

​If it would be carried out for the UN, its cost must be attributed to the UN.

​So,it would be natural that those countries are indemnified. 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(09/03/21)

 

-바람을 쐬면 긴장이 좀 풀리거듞요.

 Air change makes me relaxed. 

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

 

 

=> If you get some wind, you will be relieved of tension.


-내가 깜빡 졸았나 보구나.

I might have fallen into a doze.  

 

-도와주고 싶지맊 저도 꼼짝을 못하겠네요.

 I would like to help you, but I am stuck now.


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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