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   교정강사   Mariel(C)    등록일   2021-09-29
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  HOMEWORK: A. Which hobbies are the most popular in your country? In our country most popular his playing soccer, and soccer is the biggest league in the world. B. Make these sentences into English. -누군가 문을 노크하고 있어. -그들은 껴안았고 작별인사를 했다. -그는 조각들을 함께 묶을 거예요. -Someone's knocking on the door. -They hugged and said goodbye. -He will tie the pieces together.
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Which hobbies are the most popular in your country? 

In our country most popular his playing soccer, and soccer is the biggest league in the world.​ --> In our country, the most popular hobby is playing soccer and soccer has the biggest league in the world. => Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.


​Someone's knocking on the door.  

 

They hugged and said goodbye.  

 

He will tie the pieces together. --> He will bind the pieces together.  => Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.