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   제 목   Could lyrebirds be good pets? Why or why not? Please elaborate your answers.    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-04-19
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  Could lyrebirds be good pets? Why or why not? Please elaborate your answers. ->Yes, It can mimic human's language like a parrot. I think living with lyrebirds is quite interesting. ● Make these sentences into English. (04/06/21) -품질이 떨어지면 재주문이 끊길 수도 있습니다. Poor quality may cut off reorders -고객들의 신용도 잃고 싶지 않습니다 -I don't want to lose customer trust -한번 잃으면 다시 얻기 어려운게 신용입니다. -If you lose it, it is difficult to get it again
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Could lyrebirds be good pets? Why or why not? Please elaborate your answers.

 

->Yes, It can mimic human's language like a parrot. I think living with lyrebirds is quite interesting. 

=> Yes, they could be good pets. Because they can mimic human language like a parrot. And, I think living with lyrebirds is quite interesting. ​

 

 

 ● Make these sentences into English. 

 

 (04/06/21)

 

-품질이 떨어지면 재주문이 끊길 수도 있습니다.

Poor quality may cut off reorders.

 

=> Poor quality may cut off reorders.

​OR

=> A drop in quality could lose repeat orders.

 

-고객들의 신용도 잃고 싶지 않습니다

-I don't want to lose customer trust.​​

 

=> We also don't want to lose our customers' trust.


-한번 잃으면 다시 얻기 어려운게 신용입니다.

-If you lose it, it is difficult to get it again​.

=> It's hard to win trust back once it's lost.​

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.​​