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   교정강사   Sarah(C)    등록일   2021-10-01
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  2021.9.30 Q. Do you think electricity is the greatest invention ever? A. Yes, because almost every products that we use in life are operate from electricity. 영작숙제 -나의 고양이는 나의 가죽 소파를 긁었다. My cat scratched my leather sofa. -그의 나쁜 행동은 저녁을 망쳤다. His bad behavior ruined dinner. -코치는 팀에 벌을 주었다 Coach punished to team.
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2021.9.30

Q. Do you think electricity is the greatest invention ever?

A. Yes, because almost every products that we use in life are operate from electricity.

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically. 

A. Yes, because almost all the products that we use in life are generated from electricity.

 

영작숙제

-나의 고양이는 나의 가죽 소파를 긁었다.

My cat scratched my leather sofa. => My cat scratched my leather couch.

-그의 나쁜 행동은 저녁을 망쳤다.

His bad behavior ruined dinner.  => ​ His bad behavior spoiled the evening.

-코치는 팀에 벌을 주었다

Coach punished to team.   =>​ The coach punished the team.

=> Your sentences have correct grammatical structure, but these have the correct usage/expression.