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   제 목   Is it important for the leaders of central banks from different countries to meet each year?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-10-04
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  A.) Is it important for the leaders of central banks from different countries to meet each year? Please elaborate your answer. A central bank has a role of controlling the quantity of money in a country. Its function will be carried ou through a system. The leaders' annual meeting is lilely to be nothing but a formal event. So I don't think it important. B.) Make these sentences into English. (09/24/21) - 어쨌든 그 모델은 이미 한물간 거야. Anyway the model has already outdated. - 오늘 저녁 제가 한턱 낼게요. This evening I will treat you. - 그녀는 심각한 공주병이잖아. She is severely narcissistic.
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A.) Is it important for the leaders of central banks from different countries to meet each year? Please elaborate your answer. 

 

A central bank has a role of controlling the quantity of money  in a country. 

 

Its function will be carried ou through a system.

=> Its function will be carried out through a system.​

 

The leaders' annual meeting is lilely to be nothing but a formal event.

=> The leaders' annual meeting is likely to be nothing but a formal event.​

 

So I don't think it important.

=> So, I don't think it's important.

 B.) Make these sentences into English. 

 

 (09/24/21) 

 

- 어쨌든 그 모델은 이미 한물간 거야. 

Anyway the model  has  already outdated.

=> That model is already out of date anyway.

 

- 오늘 저녁 제가 한턱 낼게요. 

This evening I will treat you. => Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> The dinner is on me tonight.

 

 

- 그녀는 심각한 공주병이잖아. 

She is severely narcissistic.  => Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

 

=>She has a serious princess complex.


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.