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   제 목   Should governments rely on the IUCN’s Red List?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-10-04
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  A.) Should governments rely on the IUCN’s Red List? Please elaborate your answer. IUCN stands for International Union for Conservation of Nature and Natural Resources. Many countries and organizations are its members. Many experts work for it. It may be the world's biggest organization for environment. Its assessment and announcement about environment is reliable. So governments could rely on it. B.) Make these sentences into English. (09/27/21) -눈 깜빡할 사이에 갔다 왔어요. I went in a blink. -내가 가장 필요로 할 때 나한테 등을돌리더라니까. He betrayed me when I needed him most. -내가 일을 매듭 짓고 싶어서 그래. I want to wrap it up for myself.
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A.) Should governments rely on the IUCN’s Red List? Please elaborate your answer. 

 

IUCN stands for International Union for Conservation of Nature and Natural Resources.

Many countries and organizations are its members. Many experts work for it.

It may be the world's  biggest organization for environment.

Its assessment and announcement about environment is reliable.

=> Its assessment and announcement about the environment is reliable.

 

So governments could rely on it.

=>  So, governments could rely on it.

 B.) Make these sentences into English. 

 

 (09/27/21) 

 

-눈 깜빡할 사이에 갔다 왔어요. 

 I went in a blink. => Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> I was there and back in the blink of an eye.


-내가 가장 필요로 할 때 나한테 등을돌리더라니까. 

He betrayed me when I needed him most. 

-내가 일을 매듭 짓고 싶어서 그래. 

I want to wrap it up for myself. => Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

 

=> I just want to tie up the loose ends.



• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.