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   교정강사   Enya(C)    등록일   2021-10-06
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  HOMEWORK: A. What is there to be happy about in the world today? Many people pursue money and they think money can bring happy. a lot money is virtue to happy life but It's not a essential point to complete making happy life. B. Make these sentences into English. (10/06/21) -식사가 굉장히 맛있었습니다. It was a very delicious meal. -디저트를 드시겠어요? Would you like to have some dessert? -와인 좀 드릴까요? Can I get you some wine?
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HOMEWORK:

A. What is there to be happy about in the world today?

Many people pursue money and they think money can bring happy. a lot money is virtue to happy life but It's not a essential point to complete making happy life. 

 

 

CORRECTION:

 

Many people pursue money and they think money can bring happiness. Having a lot of money is not an essential point to complete a happy life. ​

 

 

(10/06/21)B. Make these sentences into English.

-식사가 굉장히 맛있었습니다.

It was a very delicious meal. ▶ The meal was delicious.

-디저트를 드시겠어요?

Would you like to have some dessert? Would you care for dessert?

 

-와인 좀 드릴까요?

Can I get you some wine?​ Would you like some wine?