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   교정강사   Vanessa(D)    등록일   2021-10-06
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  I did the rope game and together jump rope in my class. I am do in the together jump rope i'm swing the rope and the girl team won in the rope game. I was very excited and the boy team is lose the rope game. Today was very happy and tired day. Why I did the rope game and the together jump rope? Because my gym teacher's son is sick and he didn't come the school. Have a good night and see you tomorrow. Bye Bye.
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We played jump rope in the class and I was the one who swung the rope. Our team won and the boy's team lose the game. It was tiring yet a happy day. Why we played the rope game? It is because my teacher's son was sick so he did not come to school.

Have a good night and see you tomorrow!

 

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You did well today, Serim! Good night and see you tomorrow! ^^