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   제 목   What do you think the benefits we get from eating vegetables?    상 태  
   교정강사   Happy(C)    등록일   2021-10-07
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  A. What are the benefits we get from eating vegetables? When we eat enough vegetables, we will healthy.(But not too much.) B. Make these sentences into English. (10/07/21) -나는 8시쯤 일어나. 여전히 졸린걸. I get up about 8. I'm still sleepy. -운동 후에 밥을 먹도록 하자. We will eat breakfast after exercise. -하나, 둘 하나, 둘 One, two, one, two.
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A. What are the benefits we get from eating vegetables?

 When we eat enough vegetables, we will healthy.(But not too much.)

Corrected:  When we eat enough vegetables, we will be healthy.(But not too much.)​ The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(10/07/21)

-나는 8시쯤 일어나. 여전히 졸린걸.

I get up about 8. I'm still sleepy. 

Corrected: I get up at eight. I'm still sleepy. Your sentence sis okay, and this is another way of saying it.

-운동 후에 밥을 먹도록 하자.

We will eat breakfast after exercise. 

-하나, 둘 하나, 둘

One, two, one, two.​  

​Thank you for doing your homework Tae Gyu, keep studying!!!!