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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-10-12
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  HOMEWORK: A. What do you usually eat for breakfast? I usually eat cereal for breakfast. B. Make these sentences into English. (10/12/21) -방과 후엔 수영을 가요. She is going to swim after school. -그 후 심순이는 저녁에 숙제를 해요.10시에 자러 가요. And Siomsoon is doing homework at afternoon. And she sleeps at 10`o clock. -그녀는 매우 바쁘군. She is very busy.
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HOMEWORK:

A. What do you usually eat for breakfast?

I usually eat cereal for breakfast.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(10/12/21)

-방과 후엔 수영을 가요.

She is going to swim after school. -> She goes swimming after school.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

 

- 심순이는 저녁에 숙제를 해요.10시에 자러 가요.

And Siomsoon is doing homework at afternoon. And she sleeps at 10`o clock. -> And then she does her homework in the evening. She goes to sleep at ten.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

 

-그녀는 매우 바쁘군.

She is very busy.