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   교정강사   Sarah(C)    등록일   2021-10-12
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  HOMEWORK: A. What do you want to buy, if you have money? I think I will buy a smartphone. Because I can call my friends and play games. B. [Make these sentences into English] (10/12/21) -얄미야! Yalmi! -너는 무엇을 할 수 있니? What can you do? -나는 첼로와 피아노를 연주할 수 있어. I can play the cello and piano.
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HOMEWORK:

A. What do you want to buy, if you have money?

I think I will buy a smartphone. Because I can call my friends and play games.

=> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it. 

A. I think I will buy a smartphone, because I want to call my friends and play games with them.

B. [Make these sentences into English]

(10/12/21)

-얄미야!

Yalmi!

-너는 무엇을 할 수 있니?

What can you do? (Correct)

-나는 첼로와 피아노를 연주할 수 있어. (Correct)

I can play the cello and piano. => I can play the cello and the piano.  => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.​