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   제 목   Why did Arthur Eddington travel to Principe?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-10-13
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  A.) Why did Arthur Eddington travel to Principe? Please elaborate your answer. Arthur Eddington was a British scientist who was interested in Einstein's theory of relativity which could be proved in a total eclipse. He knew that a total eclipse could be seen in the island of Principe. That would be why he traveled to Principe B.) Make these sentences into English. (10/06/21) -더도 말고 덜도 말고, 장사가 오늘만 같으면 좋겠어요. I hope today's sales to be continued in the future. -오늘 뒤풀이 참석할거지? Will you join the wrap party today? -나 원래 롱다리야 I was born with long legs.
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  A.) Why did Arthur Eddington travel to Principe? Please elaborate your answer.
 
    Arthur Eddington was a British scientist who was interested 
in Einstein's theory of relativity, which could be proved in a total eclipse.
  He knew that a total eclipse could be seen in the island of Principe.
That would be why he traveled to Principe. 

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically. (Punctuation)

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(10/06/21)

-더도 말고 덜도 말고, 장사가 오늘만 같으면 좋겠어요.
 I hope today's sales to be continued in the future. => Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=> I just wish it could be like this all the time-no more, no less.

-오늘 뒤풀이 참석할거지?
 Will you join the wrap party today? 
=> You’re going to the after-party tonight, right?

-나 원래 롱다리야

 I  was born with long legs. => Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> I've got long legs.

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.