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   제 목   Where do you want to go on your next vacation? Why?    상 태  
   교정강사   Happy(C)    등록일   2021-10-19
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  A. Where do you want to go on your next vacation? Why? I want to go somewhere which is very exciting on my vacation,(For example, amusement park) because I think vacation is playing excited, B. Make these sentences into English. 10/19/21) -그는 사자를 좋아해. He likes lions. -봐! 얼룩말이 있어. 나는 얼룩말을 좋아해. Look! There's a zebra. I like zebras. -심순아, 너는 무슨 동물을 좋아하니? Simsoon, What animal do you like?
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A. Where do you want to go on your next vacation? Why? 

I want to go somewhere which is very exciting on my vacation,(For example, amusement park) because I think vacation is playing excited, 

 

Corrected: I want to go somewhere which is very exciting on my vacation,(For example, amusement park) because I think it's exciting. This is a better way. 

 

B. Make these sentences into English. 

10/19/21) 

-그는 사자를 좋아해. He likes lions. 

-봐! 얼룩말이 있어. 나는 얼룩말을 좋아해. Look! There's a zebra. I like zebras. 

-심순아, 너는 무슨 동물을 좋아하니? Simsoon, What animal do you like? 

Amazing job Tae Gyu.. keep it up!