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   교정강사   Jeniffer(C)    등록일   2021-04-21
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  I prefer organic food, even if it is more expensive. Because I am very interested in health. There is an organic food brand called 'OLGA' in Korea. My mom and I often shop there and make and eat salad, sandwich. 1. I'll let you know the result later. 2. Would you like to pay in cash? 3. I'm going to try again.
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I prefer organic food, even if it is more expensive. Because I am very interested in health. There is an organic food brand called 'OLGA' in Korea. My mom and I often shop there and make and eat salad sandwich.

 

1. I'll let you know the result later. 

2. Would you like to pay in cash? ---> Are you paying in cash?

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

3. I'm going to try again. ---> I'll try again.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.