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   제 목   If you were to speak in the General Debate, what would your speech be?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-10-20
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  A.) If you were to speak in the General Debate, what would your speech be? Please elaborate your answer. Space doesn't belong to a country. No country could dominate it. Recently some countries compete with each other to develop space, which might lead to contamination. So I would like to speak in the General Debate about the problem . B.) Make these sentences into English. (10/18/21) -그녀는 너무 자기 중심적이야. She is too selfish. -잠시 쉬고 재충전하려고요. I will take a rest for a while to recharge myself. -그냥 음악적 재능을 타고난 거 같아요. I just seem to have been born with musical talent
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​A.) If you were to speak in the General Debate, what would your speech be? Please elaborate your answer.

 

Space doesn't  belong  to  a country.  No country could dominate it.  Recently,  some countries compete with each other to develop space, which might lead to contamination.  So I would like to speak in the General Debate about  the problem . ✔

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B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(10/18/21)

 

-그녀는 너무 자기 중심적이야.

 She is too selfish. ✔​

 

-잠시 쉬고 재충전하려고요.

  I  will  take a rest for a while  to  recharge myself. ✔​

 

-그냥 음악적 재능을 타고난 거 같아요.

 I just seem to have been born with musical talent.

​=> I was just born with a talent for music.


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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