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   교정강사   Jeniffer(C)    등록일   2021-04-21
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  Korea has achieved tremendous growth in a short period of time. There are many smart people and many talented people who stand out in many fields.For example, Kim Yu-na in figure skating, director Bong Joon-ho and Yoon Yeo-jung in the movie in the film industry, and soprano Jo Su-mi. This is always a stimulus to me. And I also feel confident that I will be a good enough person to spread a good influence. -내가 나중에 전화할게. I will call you later. -내 스타킹 또 나갔어. My stockings are out again. -올림픽 기록이 깨졌다. The Olympic record has been broken.
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Korea has achieved tremendous growth in a short period of time. There are many smart people and many talented people who stand out in many fields. For example, Kim Yu-na in figure skating, director Bong Joon-ho and Yoon Yeo-jung in the movie <Mina-ri> in the film industry, and soprano Jo Su-mi. This is always an stimulus to me. And I also feel confident that I will be a person to spread a good influence. 

 

-내가 나중에 전화할게.

I will call you later. 

-내 스타킹 또 나갔어.

My stockings are out again. ---> My stocking ran again.

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-올림픽 기록이 깨졌다. 

The Olympic record has been broken. ---> The Olympic record was broken.

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