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   제 목   Should Mr. Trudeau try to form a coalition with other parties?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-10-20
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  A.) Should Mr. Trudeau try to form a coalition with other parties? Why or why not? Please elaborate your answer. The Liberal Party doesn't occupy more than half seats in the House of Commons, which is likely for it to have difficulty in carrying out a policy. But forming a coalition with other parties could sacrifice or wane a true purpose of a policy. So it could be not obligatory but selective for Mr. Trudeau to form a coalition. B.) Make these sentences into English. 10/20/21) -6시면 저한테는 꼭두새벽이에요. Six o'clock is early morning to me. -동생이 대단한 미인이라고 들었어요. I heard that your sister is a considerable beauty. -한 동안 백수로 지내고 싶대. He said that he would like to spend time as a freelancer.
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A.) Should Mr. Trudeau try to form a coalition with other parties? Why or why not? Please elaborate your answer.

 

The Liberal Party  doesn't  occupy  more than half seats in the House of Commons, which  is likely  for it to have difficulty in carrying out a policy.

But forming a coalition with other parties could sacrifice or wane  a true purpose of a policy. So it could be not obligatory, but selective for Mr. Trudeau to form a coalition.  

 

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.  (Punctuation)

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

10/20/21)

 

-6시면 저한테는 꼭두새벽이에요.

  Six o'clock is  early morning to me. => Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> Six is an ungodly hour for me.

 

-동생이 대단한 미인이라고 들었어요.
  I heard  that your sister  is  a  considerable beauty. 

-한 동안 백수로 지내고 싶대.
  He said that he would like to spend time as a freelancer.

=> She said she just wants to bum around for a while.


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.