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   교정강사   Niah(C)    등록일   2021-10-21
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  A. What do you want to do after graduation? I want to play with my friends. and I want to go on a trip, too. Finally I'm going to lose wight. B. Make these sentences into English. (10/19/21) -그는 사자를 좋아해. -봐! 얼룩말이 있어. 나는 얼룩말을 좋아해. -심순아, 너는 무슨 동물을 좋아하니? -He like lion. -Look! There is a zebra. I like it. -Sim soon, what animal do you like?
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A. What do you want to do after graduation?

I want to play with my friends. And I want to go on a trip, too. Finally, I'm going to lose weight.

=> Corrected capitalization, punctuation, and spelling. 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(10/19/21)

 

-그는 사자를 좋아해.

-봐! 얼룩말이 있어. 나는 얼룩말을 좋아해.

-심순아, 너는 무슨 동물을 좋아하니?

-He likes lions​. 

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically. 

-Look! There is a zebra. I like it. (Correct)

-Sim soon, what animal do you like? (Correct)​​