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   교정강사   Jeniffer(C)    등록일   2021-04-21
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  A. What do you think about Japanese technology? I think Japanese technology is very patient and solid. The masters of Japanese furniture and trees often maintain their family business through generations. They are not quick and flashy, but they always have great power to cultivate themselves in their place. So whenever I use Japanese products, I feel that there are not many defects. B. Make these sentences into English. -더위 때문에 우유가 상해 있었다. The milk was spoiled by the heat. -그 당시에는 도둑질로도 교수형을 당할 수가 있었다. At that time, she/he could have been hanged for stealing. -나는 얼굴에 로션을 많이 바른다. I put a lot of lotion on my face.
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A. What do you think about Japanese technology?

 

I think Japanese technology is very patient and solid. The masters of Japanese furniture and trees often maintain their family business through generations. They are not quick and flashy, but they always have great power to cultivate themselves in their place. So, whenever I use Japanese products, I feel that there are not many defects.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

-더위 때문에 우유가 상해 있었다.

The milk was spoiled by the heat. ---> The heat turned the milk sour.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

-그 당시에는 도둑질로도 교수형을 당할 수가 있었다.

At that time, she/he could have been hanged for stealing. ---> At that time you could hang for stealing.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

-나는 얼굴에 로션을 많이 바른다.

I put a lot of lotion on my face. ---> I put a lot of lotion on my face.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.