A. Why do you think it's important to vote?

Because people's opinion should be reflected, ---> It is important to vote because people's opinion should be reflected.

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically. 

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B. Make these sentences into English.

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-응, 고마워.

Yes, thank you.​ Corrected pattern=> OK. Thanks.

-엄마, 나 왔어요.

Mom, I come.​ Corrected pattern=>​ Hi, Mom. I'm home.

-심순아, 얼굴이 창백해 보인다.무슨 일 있니?

Symson, Your face looks pale. What's going on? Corrected pattern=>​ Simsoon, you look pale. What's wrong?​